The Sixth School. Chapter 051.
Added 2024-01-08 20:55:55 +0000 UTCHi guys,
Here is Chapter Fifty One.
As always, please do take the time to give me your feedback. It means a lot to me.
Enjoy.
Regards,
BlaQQuill.
Comments
Thanks for the correction.😊
BlaQQuill
2024-01-08 21:53:25 +0000 UTCNice chapter, thanks! Got an extra " at the beginning of this sentence: “A frown crossed the blacksmith’s face as he turned to his wife. And I think you meant his hand instead of her hand in this one, maybe: Greg wrapped her hand around her torso, his hands coming to cup Shalia’s D-cup breasts.
Murky
2024-01-08 21:50:15 +0000 UTCNice! Good pacing and further character development for the healer. Like it.
VT
2024-01-08 21:34:46 +0000 UTC
